Wednesday 25 May 2011

Into Eternity: Remembering to Forget our Nuclear Legacy By Chris Groves

The following is a piece written by Chris Groves formerly of BRASS and now at Cesagen and was delivered before the film Into Eternity as part of Chapter Arts Centre's Green Festival.


When asked whether he would leap in a river to save his drowning brother, the biologist J. B. S. Haldane is reputed to have said that he would risk his life for two brothers or eight cousins. Haldane’s response reflected what he felt to be the difference, from a biologist’s perspective, between what he shared in common with his own siblings on the one hand, and children of a parent’s siblings on the other. Aware that you’d typically share half your genes with a brother or sister, and one-eighth with a cousin, he was able to give a precise estimate as to the weight of his sense of obligation in either case.

We might feel inclined to similar conclusions, should we be asked what we might do for future people. Our children command great, unconditional sacrifices, our grandchildren maybe somewhat less, and so goes a pattern of weakening bonds that goes to encompass our great-grandchildren, great-great -grandchildren and then further generations we will have little or no chance of meeting. What makes the difference here? Even if we don’t share Haldane’s genetic frame of reference, then there will be other considerations: the increasing temporal distance which makes the identities of future descendants increasingly mysterious, for example, along with the uncertainty about how what you do during your lifetime might impact upon those more distant, unimaginable generations. And each generation ahead of us will stand in the same relationship to its children as we do to ours, further weakening the sense of a unique morel connection between us and temporally-distant others.

Into Eternity focuses on a by-product of our everyday lives which undermines these kinds of assumptions, and places us in an inescapable, uncannily intimate, yet thoroughly fragile relationship with people who will belong to, not the third, fourth, sixth or tenth generation to follow us, but to generations tens of thousands of years distant. There is somewhere between 2 and 300,000 tons of high –level nuclear waste (HLW) extant worldwide, produced mainly within fission processes in reactor cores. Such waste will threaten dangerous radioactive contamination of the environment – air, soil and groundwater, for up to 100,000 years. The film thus concerns our non-negotiable duty of care to deal responsibly with this waste for the duration of this period.

This responsibility has no historical precedent – it means taking care of not just one generation, nor two or even three – but hundreds of generations. Framed as a kind of letter to these future generations, Into Eternity presents us with the starkest form of a basic contradiction that arises from our dependence upon advanced technologies. This contradiction concerns how these technologies enhance our capacity to act in a way which races far ahead of our ability to understand the consequences of our actions.

Scientific knowledge of the natural world over the last couple of centuries has enabled humans to penetrate deep into and remodel the structure of matter – leading to the development of synthetic chemistry, to molecular biology and biotechnology and most recently to nanotechnology. But despite granting this power, scientific knowledge is not necessarily equally successful in predicting the future outcomes of how these technologies are used. At the same time, its obvious efficacy here in the present tends to make its beneficiaries overconfident that these limitations will be overcome in the future.

As the 20th century wore on, industrialised nations were repeatedly confronted by evidence of the existence of this gap between action and foresight. The assurance that scientific knowledge could transform the future from a terrain that had once been imagined as belonging exclusively to supernatural agencies or to fate into an infinitely malleable terrain of endless progress, was shaken by discovery of the unintended consequences of the use of DDT, polychlorinated biphenyls (PCBs), benzene, heavy metals, endocrine disrupting chemicals, thalidomide, asbestos, and so on.

Instead of being the rightful domain of human progress, the future began to be imagined as a terrain of risk, of new uncertainties derived, not from our dependence on nature, but from what the philosopher Alfred Nordmann (2005) has called “naturalised technology”, technology whose latent effects across space and time are essentially incomprehensible to the present. Instead of a belief in progress, industrialised societies often manifest an attachment to security and safety. The irony here is that, the authorities tasked with governing the risky future generated by their societies’ dependence on advanced technologies respond by seeking to develop better scientific means to predict when and how potential hazards might eventuate, even as the temporal scope – the “timescape” (Adam and Groves 2007) – of their responsibilities extend ever further into the future, as evidenced by anthropogenic climate change, the release of genetically modified organisms - and nuclear waste. The desire for safety brings a greater desire to trust the promise of scientific prediction, even as it becomes more and more fragile in the face of the tasks we set it.

In Into Eternity we are introduced to a variety of people – scientists, engineers, tunnellers, politicians, administrators, even a theologian – involved with the construction in Finland of Onkalo, a 500 metre deep waste storage facility which will be completed sometime next century, and within which will be buried the HLW from Finland’s nuclear programme. A facility, as one interviewee within the film points out, only for the waste from one small nation (how many others will be needed…?).

[Image from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olkiluoto_Nuclear_Power_Plant]

Addressing itself to future people who have opened the facility and discovered it contents, the film maps the various moral positions adopted by different actors in response to the inescapable yet indeterminate future-oriented responsibility incarnated in Onkalo. Is the safest thing really to place the waste deep below the surface (imagined by various participants as unstable, unsafe, constantly changing) within the bedrock, where the clock, as one interviewee puts it, moves more slowly than up above? If so, should future people be warned about what lies beneath the surface? And how can this be done? How can we expect to communicate with people who will live up to twenty times further into the future than the history of human literacy stretches back into the past?

For a number of those intimately involved with the planning and construction of the facility, the best thing would appear to be to protect the facility from all human interference – and so to move it entirely out of sight, out of reach, and out of mind; to erase, to actively forget its existence. Yet how will we impose this forgetting on future generations: how will we, and they, remember to forget? Perhaps the most arresting sequences from the film are those concerned with the blasters and tunnellers, who descend into the tunnels in the darkness of the early morning and return from work at night, engaged in the repetitive labour of setting charges, blasting, excavating and clearing. Like the masons of medieval cathedrals, they will likely not live to see their work completed. Yet, if the moral perspective of those who believe in the need to forget carries the day, then the efforts of the workers creating Onkalo will have been devoted not to erecting a monument to the values of the present, but to eradicating all their traces.

References
Adam, B. and Groves, C. 2007. Future Matters: Action, Knowledge, Ethics. Leiden: Brill.
Nordmann, A. 2005. Noumenal technology: reflections on the incredible tininess of Nano. Techne 8(3), pp. 3-23.

For more on the ethical aspects of our relationship with technology and future generations, see the website for the In Pursuit of the Future project.

Saturday 21 May 2011

on sharks and nature now



Damien Hirst’s Shark: Nature, Capitalism and the Sublime

by Luke White


The sheer volume of recent writings and academic conferences on the contemporary sublime suggest the subject is very much a matter of current concern [1]. But there is also a sense in which the sublime is not ever quite contemporary. To discuss the sublime now, we find ourselves inevitably tracing our way back to a historical discourse, to eighteenth-century thinkers such as Edmund Burke and Immanuel Kant who theorised sublimity in its ‘classic’ form, or to nineteenth-century artists such as Caspar David Friedrich or J.M.W. Turner, with whom the aesthetic of the sublime is tightly associated. In fact, the very eighteenth-century thinkers who developed the notion of the sublime in its familiar, modern form were already looking back to the ancient world and to Longinus, and thus found themselves already caught up in the untimeliness of the idea [2].

Such a notion of a ‘contemporary sublime’ thus seems to me to raise two closely linked questions. First: what does it mean for the sublime to be at once a matter of current concern, but also a very old idea? And second: what is the relationship between the sublime that cultural historians of the eighteenth century studied and the sublime now?

Answering these questions is complicated by the peculiarly intermittent unfolding of the history the sublime, which has cycled repeatedly between being a key aesthetic or critical idea and becoming something seemingly irrelevant and outmoded, rising from its grave repeatedly, like those movie-monsters who are never quite killed off because they are already (un)dead. This insistent repetition of the sublime – like the return of the repressed – involves us in the temporality that Freud called Nachträglichkeit (sometimes translated as ‘afterwardsness’). Entwined as it is with a temporality of return, I understand the ‘contemporary sublime’ as a matter of our culture’s haunting by the history of sublimity. In such Freudian terms, haunting and Nachträglichkeit speak in turn of trauma; and the trauma that I would argue lies at the heart of this haunting is the rise of the capitalist modernity in which, as Marx’s translators put it, ‘all that is solid melts into air’, a phrase itself redolent with alchemical notions of sublimation [3]. After all, parallel to the aesthetic revolution of the sublime ran the ‘financial revolution’ of the 1680s to 1750s [4]. If we find ourselves tangling with the sublime again today, the reason for this might be our embrace within a capitalist modernity whose form of capital has come once more to bear uncanny resemblances to the imperial, hyper-liquid and perplexingly spectral capital of the eighteenth century.

To trace one aspect of this haunted present, I shall focus here on the natural sublime. A key aspect of the recent resurgence of the sublime as a subject for study has undoubtedly been its relevance as an aesthetic of terrible nature, at a moment when, with growing fears about environmental catastrophe, nature has reappeared as a limit to human power, progress and wealth, something which even threatens to destroy us. However, the approach I have outlined above implies that such representations of nature may be intimately bound with anxieties about capitalism. It is, in particular, the transfiguration of the natural world in early modernity by developing capitalist practices which, I suggest, is key in making sense of the sublime both then and now.

Hirst’s shark

My starting place for tracing such returns of the natural sublime is Damien Hirst’s art work The Physical Impossibility of Death in the Mind of Someone Living, 1991. This is not to propose that the work is ‘sublime’ in some affirmative sense, nor to imply that Hirst has an environmentalist agenda. He is not taken up here as an exemplary artist, but rather a symptomatic one, who tells us much about our own time. Thus, Hirst’s art, riven with the contradictions of our society, is rather like capital’s uneasy dream-image of itself. His best work condenses our lived contradictions into perplexing, unforgettable, iconic images, in just the way that dreams do.

The sensibility for the sublime, it would seem to me, plays an important role in the formation of these images, and Hirst’s work is a locus where the histories of sublimity haunt contemporary culture. It often appears as if he has taken Burke’s treatise on the sublime as a handbook for cultural production (which, of course, is exactly what it was). Hirst echoes Burke’s fascination, for example, with the body, mortality, violence, pain and power. For Burke, such effects elicit ‘the strongest emotion which the mind is capable of feeling’ [5], and it is in these terms that he defines the sublime. Hirst, too, orients his production towards this maximum of affect. In this context, Hirst’s restaging of the Burkean sublime places him in a long tradition of the commercial exploitation of the tropes and themes of the sublime. This tradition of the commercialised sublime places Hirst as much in the company of the Hollywood blockbuster, with its concern for overawing its spectators, as it writes him into a history of the avant-garde. Hirst’s shark is more Steven Spielberg than it is Barnett Newman [6].

The afterlife of the sublime for Hirst, then, is a means to push his audience’s buttons. Hirst has thus spoken of his interest in the shark, for the ‘really powerful kind of horror’ [7] that it produces, and as a ‘universal trigger’. During an interview he stated that ‘everyone’s frightened of sharks, everyone loves butterflies’ [8]. But though the shark is certainly for us a powerfully charged image, carrying the frisson of the Burkean sublime, it is not, as Hirst seems to suggest, simply a matter of ‘universal’ human responses. Rather, the figure of the shark as we recognise it today is also a peculiarly modern invention; its charge is tightly bound up with the transformation of ideas of nature as these developed alongside the emergence of capitalism and the sublime. If we turn to the ancient world, and to Pliny’s description of the shark in his Natural History, we find a very different beast from the one lodged in the modern imagination.

Pliny writes: 'Divers have fierce fights with the canis marinus; these attack their loins and heels and all the white parts of the body. The one safety lies in going for them and frightening them by taking the offensive, for the canis marinus is as much afraid of a man as a man is of it.' [9]

This fish is certainly fierce and dangerous, but is far from being the inhuman monster, with those ravening, all-devouring and insatiable jaws, and row upon row of razor sharp-teeth, and with its implacable pursuit of human flesh, that occupies the fantasies of contemporary culture. There is none of Hirst’s ‘powerful kind of horror’ here, which is also to say categorically no sublimity. Even Pliny’s name for this beast, canis marinus or ‘dog of the sea’, which, translated into one language or another, was the primary name used in Europe for sharks throughout the Middle Ages, serves to make this beast familiar, small and ordinary. Only in the sixteenth century did new words appear to describe the shark in European languages: in Spanish, tiburón; in French, requin; and in English shark. These words shed the humdrum connotations of the dog, allowing sharks to be reimagined as terrible monsters of the deep.


What is ‘triggered’ in Hirst’s presentation of the shark, then, is not just primordial fear, but also a complex web of historically produced associations. It is this historical web, which stands as the ground of the sculpture’s possibility, that I want to examine further.



Changing conceptions of nature

The date at which this occurred locates the emergence of the modern conception of the shark within the context of a larger re-figuration of nature itself. This transformation has been charted in Marjorie Hope Nicolson’s Mountain Gloom and Mountain Glory (1959). In this now-classic publication, Nicolson asks how it was that during the seventeenth century rugged mountainous scenery transformed from being almost universally described in terms of the most ugly, disgusting and morally dubious things in the universe – ‘warts’ or ‘wens’ on the landscape, or even ‘buttocks’ sticking up out of it – to become the source of the deep feeling of awe, wonder, and reverence with which we are familiar today [10]. She was thus struck with the strange (and sudden) modernity of what seems to us an entirely natural aesthetic response. It is this new experience which would, in the eighteenth century, be theorised through the notion of the sublime.

Nicolson explains this monumental shift in sensibility in terms of a cosmographic revolution centring on new scientific theories: Galileo’s discovery that the earth does not lie at the centre of the solar system, or Descartes’ and Newton’s proposal of an infinite and centreless space, for example, or theories, such as those of Burnet or Agricola, about the earth’s surface being formed through processes of violent change. Very different from the stable, orderly and anthropocentric Ptolomaic cosmos which was the previously dominant model, these visions recast the universe as vast, formless, dynamic and violent, radically displacing humanity from its centre. For writers of the seventeenth century, God was to be sought now not in orderliness, but in the scale and violence of creation. Vast mountains, echoing the characteristics of this new vision of the universe, became privileged sites for its appreciation. When early-seventeenth-century Northern Europeans on the Grand Tour crossed the Alps they perceived them merely as ugly and dangerous, but by the end of the century they found them instead exhilarating, fascinating and sublime [11].

Alongside and against Nicolson’s focus on science as causing these changes – which today seems somewhat reductive – I would also like to explore this in terms of the development of pre-industrial capitalism. The cosmographic vision of Milton’s Paradise Lost (1667, republished in 1674) offers us a way of approaching this.

Paradise Lost

Milton’s epic poem was, of course, one of the canonical examples around which eighteenth-century critics developed theories of the sublime [12]. Much of its sublimity, I would argue, comes from its powerful articulation of the new universe which Nicolson describes [13]. The poem’s vast, formless space resists mapping. Its locations are separated by immeasurable voids of dark, cold space [14]. Gustave Doré’s nineteenth-century illustration of Book 3, lines 739–41 of Paradise Lost, in which Satan is traversing these voids makes an admirable attempt to capture something of this quality.

The poem is characterised by disorienting shifts in scale or perspective, akin to the shock of the new experiences of looking through telescopes and microscopes. But this Miltonic universe, even in its adherence to the new sciences, has also been understood as an articulation of an emerging ‘bourgeois’ ideology, and as an apologia for ‘marketised’ social and political relations. Milton, after all, had served as a propagandist for Oliver Cromwell during the English Civil War. John Rogers thus argues that Milton’s decentred universe drew on new materialist sciences to re-envision, at the level of matter itself, the organisation of a state run not according to the absolute decrees of a divinely instituted monarch, but to an order emerging spontaneously from the interactions of its parts [15]. In such a universe, God’s power is distributed atomistically into a vital, active, self-organising matter [16]. But Rogers goes on to argue that these vitalist-materialist sciences themselves drew their paradigms of emergent organisation from the nascent discourse of political economy, in the ‘nearly laissez-faire’ writings, for example, of Thomas Mun and Edward Misselden, who were already arguing in the 1620s that that markets functioned most harmoniously when exempt from intrusive monarchic practices of price-fixing [17]. It was when left alone by authority, they argued, that goods circulated freely, stimulating a vigorously productive economy. Rogers’s argument is that if Milton’s political ‘proto-liberalism’ is informed by scientific ideas of self-organising matter, these are informed in their turn by an embryonic economic liberalism.

What seems at first problematic with understanding this Miltonic vision of sublime nature as ideology for an embryonic liberalism, is that Milton’s cosmos so often seems a hostile, inhuman place. The matter of this universe often seems to generate not a benevolent order, but rather formless monstrosity. The apotheosis of this darkly sublime principle of Miltonic nature seems, in fact, to be his vision of hell. But ideology, in any case, is always dependent on first raising the very contradiction that it wishes to dispel, and Milton’s poem can thus be understood as shot through with the conflicts which he himself lived but could not fully articulate. Paradise Lost can thus be read as the poetic symptom of the anxieties of an emerging capitalist order.

In the poetry and science of the seventeenth century, then, ‘nature’ is produced through the same abstraction that now mediates social relations, and was already being recognised as eroding older forms of order, value and hierarchy [18]. Like capital, nature seemed increasingly formless, mutable, dynamic, and productive of violent upheaval. Nature and capital alike appeared unbounded, unpresentable, and permeated by a purposiveness quite indifferent to human welfare. There is a profound homology between Newton’s infinite, abstract space, which gave birth to innumerable paeans to the sublime vastness of the universe, and the spatial abstractions which Milton’s and Newton’s contemporary William Petty, another father of economics, was putting into practice in the mapping and colonial exploitation of Ireland under the name of ‘political arithmetic’.

Nature, capitalism and the shark

Although this excursion into Milton seems to have moved us away from Hirst’s shark in formaldehyde, I have aimed to sketch the transformed vision of nature in which the peculiarly modern figure of the shark emerges. In Book 2 of Paradise Lost, the fallen angels set out on their own colonial mission, ‘On bold adventure to discover wide / That dismal world, if any clime perhaps / Might yield them easier habitation’. The landscape they encounter (much like that encountered by European colonists in reality) is shifting, extreme and hostile; they find ‘a Universe of death’ (a phrase which Burke picks out for special attention in his account of the sublime) [19] in which ‘all life dies, death lives, and Nature breeds, / Perverse, all monstrous, all prodigious things, / Obominable, inutterable, and worse / Than fables yet have feigned’ [20] (fig.3). The monstrous generation which this landscape produces – a deathly un-creation – marks the zenith of the infernal sublimity of Milton’s universe; and though Milton does not give us any sharks in his poem, we might also recognise the shark, in the form in which it haunts the modern imagination, as just the kind of monster which such a landscape would throw up [21]. That such a monstrously generative nature (the kind of nature which would produce the shark) is to be discovered in the context of a fantasy scene of colonisation is itself significant, and a matter to which I shall return shortly.


The shark, I would argue, serves as a hyperbolic example of the terrible sublimity of this new conception of nature. The thrill of such a wild nature is pursued today through the shark in novels, films, wildlife documentaries and extreme tourism. My argument is that the shark provides, throughout its modern history, an image not only of nature as hostile but furthermore, and more precisely, of nature being as rapacious, insatiable, and unfeeling as capital accumulation itself [22].

The trope which ties the shark to capitalism has thus been insistent. For a well-known example we need look no further than Steven Spielberg’s film Jaws (1975). Here, the predatory instincts of the shark are mirrored on land by the economic forces that drive the suppression of public knowledge of the shark attacks, so as not to damage profits from the holiday trade. Such a privileging of economic rationality over people’s welfare belies the very name of the seaside town, ‘Amity’, which evokes a pre-modern form of community based on human feeling, an escape from the dysfunctional urban modernity which Police Chief Brody had hoped to leave behind in New York [23]. The water lapping at Spielberg’s lens in the beach scenes gives visual form to the contrast between what lies ‘above’ the bright surface of American consumer culture, and the social violence which lurks below.
 

For further examples, we could certainly trace the way that themes of economic exploitation permeate the genre of the ‘killer shark’ movie [24]. But the shark becomes more generally – and repeatedly – a representative figure of capital, even in visual forms which would be far less easily understood as ‘critiques’ of capitalism: in images that might be understood, that is to say, as its own self-presentations. The cover for The Economist (by no means an organ of the subversive left) for 17–23 November 2007, under the headline ‘America’s Vulnerable Economy’, pastiched the famous poster for Jaws, with a female swimmer clad in a stars-and-stripes bikini menaced by a monster shark emerging from the depths beneath her. Even here, in what we would expect to be the most sympathetic of depictions of the processes of capital, these are imagined through the image of the unfeeling, automatic predation of the shark.


Similarly, an advertisement displayed in the streets of London on March 2008, for the Financial Times, illustrated ‘in-depth thinking’ about mergers and acquisitions with an image of a chain of ever-larger sharks swallowing their smaller brethren. As I prepared this paper, I discovered a further example of the shark being used to sell a financial product in street advertising, this time a Henderson New Star investment fund. On a huge billboard, a diver was pictured next to a shark. The tagline of the advertisement claimed ‘This fund is so flexible [this last word in giant letters] you’re less likely to find yourself in the wrong place’. The fund, then, was being offered as a form of shelter from the perilous waters of the marketplace. But the emphasis of the advertisement on the word ‘flexible’ offers up another, parallel meaning. What was flexible in the image? It was the body of the shark itself, which we know to be lithe, elastic and muscular, and which was depicted curving around towards the poster’s viewer in a sinuous arc. What was on sale here was not just protection, but a piece of ‘shark-like’ financial suppleness – a fund which will eat rather than be eaten.

Race, slavery and colonial exploitation

In mentioning William Petty’s ‘political arithmetic’ above, I have argued for a link between the uses of spatial abstraction for sublime reverie and for colonial exploitation. These also intertwine in the figure of the shark. Petty’s abstract space is reiterated in Hirst’s vitrines, which figure processes of techno-scientific abstraction just as threatening to the living body as the shark itself. In Hirst’s shark, these two forms of violence – natural and technological – seem deliberately intertwined, each serving as a reinforcement of the other. The rationalisation here is now, of course, not that of colonial expropriation, but rather that of the commodification and control of human life in late twentieth-century society. It is the space of the panopticon, the museum, the hospital, and, as Hirst’s The Acquired Inability to Escape (made the same year as Physical Impossibility) makes clear, the office-worker’s prison-like cubicle. (Interestingly, Hirst himself, as he worked his way through art college, did time operating the phones for a market research company.) However much this art work may in other respects accommodate itself to the spectacular forms and ideologies of the market, it nonetheless speaks volumes about the experience of being locked within spatio-practical logics of modern, capitalist and technocratic society.


However (and as I have already suggested in my account of the shark as fitting with the monstrously generative Miltonic landscape of hell-as-colonial-outpost), it was largely in relation to that earlier form of imperialist capitalism that the shark first came to figure as an image of the inhumanity of capital. It is, above all, in this context that the shark emerged in the Western imaginary in its specifically modern form, as a monster. The new words which came to name this beast – shark in English and tiburón in Spanish, for example – are imported from languages encountered in the New World, and carry with them the connotations of the new spaces of colonization [25]. These, the blank spaces on the map, were suitable screens for outward projection. The shark was a figure that allowed the violence of social relations to be imagined ‘out there’, at the wild margins of empire, in a hostile nature which ‘over here’ was tamed by civilisation.

James Thomson’s poem, The Seasons (1730), is a case in point. Thomson was a key early eighteenth-century proponent of the natural sublime in poetry, and (to give you some sense of where his politics and his attitude to Empire may have lain), the writer of the lyrics of ‘Rule, Britannia!’ The Seasons, drawing out the imaginary geography of Empire, contrasts the gently bucolic nature of merry England with the sublime and violent nature of the colonial margins. Amongst the best-known of the horrors that he packs into his depiction of the latter is a description of a slave ship which has run into a tropical storm that will destroy it. Pursuing the ship is a shark, waiting to devour the bodies of the men aboard [26].

Thomson’s description of the shark runs:
    Increasing still the sorrows of those storms,
    His jaws horrific arm’d with three-fold fate,
    Here dwells the direful shark. Lured by the scent
    Of steaming crowds, of rank disease, and death,
    Behold! He, rushing, cuts the briny flood,
    Swift as the gale can bear the ship along;
    And from the partners of that cruel trade,
    Which spoils unhappy Guinea of her sons,
    Demands his share of prey – demands themselves!
    The stormy fates descend: one death involves
    Tyrants and slaves; when straight their mangled limbs
    Crashing at once, he dyes the purple seas
    With gore, and riots in the vengeful meal [27].

Thomson here makes much of the shark as a leveller, devouring slave and master alike. Their flesh is reduced to indistinguishable ‘gore’. But this is ideology of course, erasing social difference to disavow the much more particular murderousness of the slave trade, which is now projected outwards onto the shark and into a ‘natural’ order. (We might at this point wonder whether Hirst’s conflation of natural and technological violence also plays something of this role, where the violence of techno-capitalism is imagined as being also part of the prehistoric and even pre-human natural order of predation to which the archaic shark belongs.) But even as this disavowal is performed, the shark itself is nonetheless described in Thomson’s poem metaphorically as a capitalist. It is a ‘partner’ in the ‘cruel trade / which spoils unhappy Guinea of her sons’, and one who ‘demands his share of prey’. Like Milton (and Hirst), Thomson cannot entirely escape the anxieties his work may otherwise be understood to serve to disavow.

The shark and the slave, in fact, are often associated in Western culture, in England right from the very first recorded use of the word shark, in a broadsheet of 1569 [28]. A sixteen-foot shark had been caught off the Dover coast, and was brought to London to be presented as a show in Billingsgate, in a conjunction of money, media interest and exhibitionary spectacle that might remind a contemporary reader of Hirst exhibiting at the Saatchi Gallery or the Royal Academy. The name for this strange, monstrous fish – ‘shark’ – was to be discovered, explained the broadsheet, on the lips of a crew of slavers just returned from the Americas, whose survival of hardships had earned them something of a celebrity status in London that summer. The name ‘shark’ stuck; and so did the special association of the fish with the racialised bodies of the victims of the slave trade, an association lasting well into the twentieth century. As that century was about to dawn, Winslow Homer painted The Gulf Stream (Metropolitan Museum of Art, 1899), depicting a black sailor in a dilapidated boat, surrounded by sharks. 


In the middle of the century, the plot of Tintin and the Red Sea Sharks (originally published in 1958) revolved around a ring smuggling Africans enslaved whilst on the pilgrimage to Mecca. And still in 1999, a full century after Homer’s painting, in the shark-attack movie Deep Blue Sea, the character played by rap artist L.L. Cool J., in a moment of cinematic reflexivity, can still complain: ‘Brothers never make it out of situations like this!’

 
In conjunction with this continued association of the shark with slavery, Thomson’s figuration of the shark as a capitalist can be approached through Paul Gilroy’s work on the Black Atlantic [29]. Gilroy argues that the experience of the Middle Passage served as a blueprint for capitalist modernity. Slavery would provide the testing ground of a logic where all human life and labour were subject to the calculation of profit [30]. Thomson’s shark reducing its victims to homogeneous ‘gore’ thus not only serves to ideologically erase social difference, but also as a powerful image of the reduction of the particularity of the human body to the abstraction of exchange-value.

Visions of global empire, then and now

John Singleton Copley’s Watson and the Shark 1778, which created a ‘sensation’ at the Royal Academy some 219 years before Damien Hirst’ s work, reprised many of Thomson’s themes. It commemorates the salvation from the jaws of a shark, whilst on a slave-trading expedition, of one Brook Watson, then a rising figure in the City of London [31]. Like Thomson’s poem, Copley’s painting allows his elite London audience to envision themselves at the heart of the global-colonial network of enterprise from which their wealth was derived, staging a contrast between their own lives and this exotic and dangerous elsewhere. Its depiction of ‘honest Tars’(as one reviewer called them) pulling together to save Watson provides a reassuring image of colonial endeavour. Its disavowal of social difference – echoing Thomson’s – is amplified in the compositional inversion which places Watson, the most socially elevated figure in the painting, at the base of the composition, and a black sailor at its pinnacle.

Hirst’s sculpture, I suggest, involves us in an updated version of the fantasy of Thomson and Copley’s global space of empire. The shark in Hirst remains a token of the exotic, fearsome nature of the antipodes, put on display through the power of money, and by the communicational technologies which allow one to have a shark caught on the other side of the world, refrigerated and shipped back to London. We are positioned, like Thomson’s and Copley’s audiences, at the heart of a spider web of wealth and power. This is surely a part of the frisson of pleasure that Hirst offers us [32]. This is, of course, not the Whig-liberal Empire of the eighteenth century which formed the context of the development of the sublime in British criticism, but rather the informational, transnational capital of a new kind of globalisation, within the flows of which the London of the 1980s was asserting itself. This globalisation, of course, is no longer based around slavery, but those very different forms of the calculation and control of human labour powers which I have mentioned already in relation to Hirst’s Acquired Inability to Escape. Hirst’s shark, with its imperial sublime, however, allows us to imagine today’s Empire through the schema of its older type.

Nature, now

The nature we meet in Hirst’s art work is transformed, too. If nature in the eighteenth century still seemed a powerful limit to human endeavour, the industrial and technical developments of the nineteenth and twentieth centuries made it seem increasingly less significant. Cultural historian David Nye has charted the development of a ‘technological sublime’, which replaced the natural variety [33]. By the 1960s, the sociologist and philosopher Theodor W. Adorno could think of the natural sublime as an ephemeral stage in European aesthetic sensibility, which had quickly lost its power to present humanity with the ‘non-identitical’ [34]. For the literary critic and political theorist Fredric Jameson, in the 1980s, the natural sublime had been replaced by the sublimity of the ‘second nature’ of the man-made environment, which was what now seemed primarily to face humanity as a terrible and counter-purposive Otherness [35]. If, with the growth of late twentieth-century environmental anxieties, nature has been reasserting itself as outside human control, then this is a nature which is now clearly overcoded with the powers of capitalist techno-science to transform it: a ‘third nature’, if you like, which is neither fully cultural nor fully outside of culture, but a hybrid of both [36]. This is the ‘techno-nature’ we find in Hirst’s vitrines. It is also more generally omnipresent in contemporary representations of sharks. The sharks we meet in horror films – in Jaws itself, or more recently in movies such as Deep Blue Sea (1999) or Shark Swarm (2008) – are repeatedly the products of human interference with nature [37]. It is a commonplace, furthermore, to describe the shark through technological metaphors: Hooper, the marine biologist in Jaws, is typical, calling the shark ‘a perfect engine – an eating machine’. In this regard the notoriously obvious mechanical nature of Spielberg’s ‘shark’ makes a certain kind of a sense in embodying how we imagine such creatures, as at once an absolute of voraciousness but also as hollowed out of desire: empty, subjectless, automatic. Peter Benchley’s novel, on which Spielberg’s movie was based, extends these metaphors in its descriptions of the shark. When it devours its first victim, Benchley, making the shark more machine than fish, describes it as hitting her ‘like a locomotive’ [38]. In the first description we have of the monster, it is figuratively decomposed not into a unified entity with a will or agency, but rather, a series of organs which communicate with each other through processes ‘transmission’. It is a kind of cybernetic organism, processing data or ‘signals’ (a word which Benchley repeats) from the world outside it. The cybernetic motif is taken up more emphatically later in the book, where the shark is found ‘banking’, registering ‘impulses’, ‘locking on’ to these and ‘homing’ in on them [39]. The shark here is even more clearly a piece of military hardware, a computerised weapon, at a moment, at the very end of the Vietnam War, when information technology was increasingly permeating both warfare and everyday life.

What I have argued here is that these ways of figuring contemporary anxieties about the penetration of the ‘natural’ world by technology are themselves possible on the basis of histories of representation in which the shark – and more generally the sublime, terrible nature of which it is a representative – has served as a displaced figure of the economic relations of capitalist modernity. Sublime nature is overdetermined, from the start, by a vision of the social. The contemporary reappearance of the natural sublime has occurred at a moment when the vision of the unified planetary scale serves as an image at once of an eco-system but also of a global economic order. But this planetary economico-environmental order is often imagined in terms of older maps of Empire.

Finally, I would like to focus upon a further example of where we find the contemporary sublime of the shark overlaid with old maps of Empire. In the summer of 2007 two very large sharks were spotted off the coast of Cornwall, prompting an immediate shark frenzy in the tabloids, and speculation that these were killer Great Whites. (See especially the editions of The Sun published from 28 July–1 August of that year.) The sightings, the newspapers implied, were the result of environmental changes – raising the spectre of British waters, with global warming, becoming the hunting ground of these monsters more often associated with the tropics. This also, however, figures the collapse of the comforting global order of Thomson and Copley, and the return of a violence which is both social and natural to the once tame and safe heart of power. Read in this way, this image of a tropical monster besieging our shores, produced at a time of profound paranoia about terrorism, raises the spectre of the chaos, poverty, war and exploitation which has long been exported to the former colonies, coming home to roost at the former heart of empire.


We see a similar instance where behind the natural sublime there lurks a set of more properly social fears about the nature of the global order in the disaster movie The Day After Tomorrow (2004), which also envisions a turning inside out of the map of empire, where the tame heartland reverts to absolute wilderness, though this time in its arctic rather than tropical form. That such a scenario is motivated by political as well as ecological fears is revealed in the film’s bizarre final fantasy of reconciliation in which, after the rich northern hemisphere has been overcome by climatic disaster, the survivors are welcomed as refugees in the now relatively-temperate global south in exchange for the cancellation of ‘Third World’ debt.

Notes
1. For example, this paper was delivered first in 2010 at a symposium which was one of a series organised by Tate in relation to its research project, The Sublime Object: Nature, Art and Language, funded by the Arts and Humanities Research Council.

2. Even Longinus himself, whose essay, in the form in which we have it, ends up with a plaint against the degradation of poetry and morals with the increasing materialism of his own day, found himself looking backwards (to Homer and to Plato, for example) for his models of rhetorical sublimity.

3. The phrase is from Chapter 1 of The Communist Manifesto, available online from the Marx and Engels Internet Archive at http://www.marxists.org/archive/marx/works/1848/communist-manifesto/ch01.htm accessed February 2010.

4. See in particular P.G.M. Dickson, The Financial Revolution in England: A Study of the Development of Public Credit 1688–1756, New York 1967. This period, which takes us almost exactly from Boileau to Burke, also sees the development of key financial institutions such as the Bank of England and Lloyds of London, the tradability of national debt, a massive explosion of joint-stock companies and financial speculation, and the generalisation of credit throughout society.

5. Edmund Burke, ‘A Philosophical Enquiry into the Origin of Our Ideas of the Sublime and Beautiful’, in A Philosophical Enquiry into the Origin of our Ideas of the Sublime and Beautiful and Other Pre-Revolutionary Writings, London 2004, part 1, section 7, p.86.

6. Or perhaps rather, if, as Jean-Luc Godard suggested, the 1968 generation were the children of Mao and Coca-Cola, then Hirst’s art is the product of a union between Barnett Newman and Steven Spielberg. Figured this way, the Hirstean sublime might raise some uncanny questions about what it is that ties together Newman and Spielberg – seemingly at opposite ends of a cultural spectrum though they are.

7. Damien Hirst and Gordon Burn, On the Way to Work, London 2001, p.19.

8. Damien Hirst, I Want to Spend the Rest of My Life Everywhere, with Everyone, One to One, Always, Forever, Now, reduced edition, London 2005, p.132.

9. Pliny The Elder, Natural History, trans. by H. Rackham, London 1983, vol.3, p.267 (translation slightly altered).

10. Marjorie Hope Nicolson, Mountain Gloom and Mountain Glory: The Development of the Aesthetics of the Infinite, Seattle and London, 1997, p.29. It is in particular Hobbes who finds buttocks a suitable description for the Derbyshire peaks (Nicolson, Mountain Gloom, p.65).

11. Compare, for example, John Evelyn, who, crossing the Alps in 1644, writes that it is ‘as if nature had here swept up the rubbish of the Earth in the Alps’ (cited in Nicolson, p.62) with Dennis, who in 1688 wrote: ‘We walk’d upon the very brink, in a literal sense, of Destruction … The sense of all this produc’d different emotions in me, viz., a delightful Horrour, a terrible Joy, and at the same time, that I was infinitely pleas’d, I trembled … Nature seems to have design’d [the Alps], and execut’d [them] too in Fury. Yet she moves us less when she studies to please us more. … Transporting Pleasures followed the sight of the Alpes, and what unusual Transports think you were those, that were mingled with Horrours, and sometimes almost with despair?’ (cited in Nicolson, Mountain Gloom, pp.277–8). Dennis’s paradoxical emotions – joy and yet terror, horror and yet delight – in the face of such a nature already take us into the aesthetic territory which Burke would theorise through the notion of the sublime.

12. See for example John Dennis, ‘On Milton’s Sublimity, from The Advancement and Reformation of Modern Poetry’, in Milton: The Critical Heritage, ed. by John T. Shawcross, London 1970, pp.125–7, or Addison’s extended critique of Paradise Lost in a series of Saturday Spectator papers from nos.267 to 369 (5 January – 3 May 1712). Milton’s role in the English canon of sublime literature, as developed in the eighteenth century is discussed at length in Leslie Moore, Beautiful Sublime: The Making of Paradise Lost, 1701–1734, Stanford 1990, and also Jonathan Brody Kramnick, Making the English Canon: Print-Capitalism and the Cultural Past, 1700–1770, Cambridge 1998. Burke discusses Milton as exemplary of the sublime in his Philosophical Enquiry, in part 2 section 3 (‘Obscurity’), part 2, section 5 (‘The Same Subject Continued) and part 5, section 7 (‘How Words Influence the Passions’). See Burke, Philosophical Enquiry, pp.103, 105–6, 197–8.

13. Indeed, several twentieth-century critics have investigated Milton’s relation to the new sciences, for example Karen Edwards, Milton and the Natural World: Science in Paradise Lost, New York and Cambridge 1999; John Rogers, The Matter of Revolution: Science, Poetry and Politics in the Age of Milton, Ithaca and London 1996; Christopher Hill, Milton and the English Revolution, London 1979, pp.398–401.

14. Satan describes the space he traverses between worlds as a ‘dark unbottom’d infinite Abyss’ (Paradise Lost, 2.405). It is a ‘void profound / Of unessential Night [which] receives him [who enters it] … / Wide gaping, and with utter loss of being / Threatens him, plung’d in that abortive gulf’ (2.238–440). It is:
… a dark
Illimitable Ocean without bound,
Without dimension, where length, breadth, & highth,
And time and place are lost; where eldest Night
And Chaos, Ancestors of Nature, hold
Eternal Anarchie, amidst the noise
Of endless Warrs, and by confusion stand. (2.891–7)
It is in particular books 2 and 3 that to have so many fine examples of this perplexing space, but Milton’s grand and terrible vision of the universe is by no means limited to these.

15. As John Rogers has put it, we can understand Milton’s poem as subject to the ‘need to forge an ontological connection between physical motion and political action’. Rogers, The Matter of Revolution, p.ix.

16. Rogers picks out, in particular, Milton’s account of creation, as given by Uriel in book 3. In this, in a ‘massive liberalisation of the cosmos’, matter becomes ‘God’s disidentified body’ (Rogers, The Matter of Revolution, p.113). Raphael’s account of the creation in 7.276–84 (though he generally depicts a more hierarchical order) also depicts the world as paradoxically self-generating. This strange – and actually rather heretical – vision of matter as imbued with divine spirit allows Milton to propose a third way between the Calvinist vision of pre-destination, in which God actively commands everything from a central location, and the Hobbesian vision of matter as constituted by violently colliding particles, and society by the war of all against all, whose destructive conflict can only be held in check by the will of an absolute sovereign. The poem in fact seems to waver between these different positions, as if between them they pose a structure of the possibilities of thinking within which Milton was interpellated.

17. Rogers, The Matter of Revolution, p.22.

18. For more on the early modern anxieties about the liquidity of capital, its unsettling social effects, and its transformation of the world of appearances, see Jean-Christophe Agnew, Worlds Apart: The Market and the Theatre in Anglo-American Thought, 1550–1750, Cambridge 1986.

19. Burke, Philosophical Enquiry, pp.197–8.

20. Paradise Lost 2.571–3; 2.622; 2.624–7.

21. It is also not incidental that it is the Miltonic vision of such monstrous productivity which Alexander Pope was to take up in his satire of the emerging capitalist literary industry of the early eighteenth century, in his Dunciad. I discuss Pope at length in my PhD thesis, ‘Damien Hirst and the Legacy of the Sublime in Contemporary Art and Culture’, Middlesex University 2009.

22. Throughout modern culture the image of the shark brings together the two inter-folded forms of the ‘inhuman’ which Jean-François Lyotard proposes surround and construct the ‘human’ in modern discourse: the inhumanity of nature and that of techno-capitalist reason. Jean-François Lyotard, The Inhuman: Reflections on Time, trans. by Geoffrey Bennington and Rachel Bowlby, Cambridge 1991.

23. No less a politician than Fidel Castro read the film as ‘an indictment of greedy capitalists willing to sacrifice people’s lives to protect their investments’. Cited in Joseph McBride, Steven Spielberg: A Biography, London 1998, p.255. Interestingly enough Spielberg, who is often imagined as ultra-conservative, when he was told the remark by a journalist, is reported to have found Castro’s analysis a ‘wonderful’ and perspicuous interpretation of the film.

24. In Shark Swarm (2008), for example, the sharks have been made hyper-aggressive by the illegal dumping of toxic waste by a real-estate developer, who is seeking to drive a fishing community out of business in order to buy up their land cheaply.

25. For further discussions of the development of the figure of the shark in relation to the colonial experience, see J. I. Castro, ‘On the Origins of the Spanish Word “Tiburón”, and the English Word “Shark”’, Environmental Biology of Fishes, vol.65, no.3, 2002, pp.249–53; Tom Jones, ‘The Xoc, the Sharke, and the Sea Dogs: An Historical Encounter’, in Virginia M. Fields (ed.), Fifth Palenque Round Table, 1983, San Francisco 1985, pp.211–22.

26. Samuel Holt Monk, in his still-classic account of the sublime, calls the passage ‘too well known for quotation’. Samuel Holt Monk, The Sublime: A Study of Critical Theories in XVIII-Century England, Ann Arbor 1960, p.89.

27. James Thomson, ‘Summer’ in The Seasons, Oxford 1972, lines 1013–25.

28. That this is the first recorded use of the term is proposed by the OED, and also the etymologies offered by Castro and Jones. The anonymously authored broadsheet in question is entitled ‘The True Discripcion of This Marveilous Straunge Fishe, Which Was Taken on Thursday Was Sennight, the XVI. Day of June, This Present Month, in the Yeare of Our Lord God, M.D.LXIX.’ (1569) and is to be found in Joseph Lilly (ed.), A Collection of Seventy-Nine Black Letter Ballads and Broadsides, Printed in the Reign of Queen Elizabeth, between the Years 1559 and 1579, London 1867, pp.145–7.

29. Paul Gilroy, The Black Atlantic: Modernity and Double Consciousness, London 1993.

30. There is a link here, again, to William Petty, whose ‘political arithmetic’ was also a matter of such calculations; Petty measured the economic ‘cost’ of possible massacres of the Irish people in terms of the damage to the labour power of the nation.

31. Watson would later become an Alderman of the City of London, Member of Parliament (to which he spoke against the prohibition of slavery), Lord Mayor of London, a Director of the Bank of England, and finally a Baronet.

32. For more on this, see my analysis of Hirst’s shark and also his ‘diamond skull’ (For The Love of God, 2007) in my essay ‘Damien Hirst’s Diamond Skull and the Capitalist Sublime’, in Luke White and Claire Pajaczkowska (eds.), The Sublime Now, Newcastle upon Tyne 2009, pp.155–171.

33. David Nye, American Technological Sublime, Cambridge MA 1994.

34. Theodor Adorno, Aesthetic Theory, trans. Robert Hullot-Kentor, ed. Gretel Adorno, Rolf Teidemann and Robert Hullot-Kentor, London 2002, p.70.

35. Fredric Jameson, Postmodernism, or, The Cultural Logic of Late Capitalism, London 1991, especially pp.34–7. As it emerges from Jameson’s account, the prominent sublime of that decade was a ‘cybersublime’: the subject lost in the infinity of a virtual reality entirely unmoored from the limits of the physical world, but which Jameson proposes in any case serves itself as a cipher for, or way to start to imagine, the unthinkable flows of postmodern capital itself.

36. For more on such a ‘third nature’, see Gene Ray, ‘History, Sublime, Terror: Notes on the Politics of Fear’, in White and Pajaczkowska (eds.), The Sublime Now, pp.133–54.

37. The behaviour of the shark in Jaws, it is implied at one point, may be the result of overfishing; Quint’s story about the sinking of the USS Indianapolis – the ship which delivered uranium for the bomb dropped on Hiroshima – creates alternative associative links. In Shark Swarm (2008), the killer sharks have mutated owing to dumping of toxic waste by a real estate developer. In Deep Blue Sea, genetically-modified, super-intelligent sharks escape and pursue the scientists that bred them. Again, it is capitalism which is posited at the heart of this transgression of the ‘natural’ balance of nature: a businessman has sunk $200 million into the work, in order to profit from the development of a cure for Alzheimer’s.

38. Peter Benchley, Jaws, 2nd printing, London 1976, pp.9–12.

39. Ibid., p.53.

Wednesday 18 May 2011

One-Talk Wonder

I just got back from CSEE 2011 in Banff, Alberta, where I was awarded a 3rd place prize for my student talk. I won 4th place last year (and a gift certificate at springer.com, where I picked up some great stats books). I seem to have developed a winning formula, and a few colleagues have asked for tips for giving a student conference talk, which I define as an oral presentation of 10-15 minutes (typically 12) with visual aids (PowerPoint or other ‘slides’) given to an academic audience of people in your discipline, but not necessarily your area of specialty.

I can sum it all up in a few short points, which I will explain in a bit more detail below:

I also have a few Other Notes about using presentation software (PowerPoint, KeyNote, Beamer, Presenter, etc.) and resources that I recommend checking out.

Why should I care?

This refers to two aspects of planning your talk: your personal goals (“I” refers to you), and what you want others to take away or remember from your talk (“I” refers to someone in your audience).

It might help to start by choosing your goals. What do you want to achieve with your talk?

  • Highlight an important recent result of your research
  • Articulate a conceptual argument
  • Raise important questions deserving of discussion
  • Take a deliberate position, thus inviting or inciting others to participate in a discussion
  • Provoke questions
  • Attract attention from certain people (by field or name)

The important thing to avoid at all costs is for your audience to ask themselves “Why should I care (about this talk)?” The answer should be obvious from the beginning to the end of your talk. Once you know what the answer is for your talk, it will help you plan the “story ark”, and the slides.

Less is More

You only have 10-12 minutes for a typical conference presentation. I often see people trying to cram too much information into too short a time. Even if you manage to speed-talk your way through it all, no one will remember it all. Choose one or two “take-home messages” that you want your audience to remember, and focus on those. Anything else will only distract them and you risk them not remembering anything, or running out of time.

I vividly remember nodding off in a talk about greenhouse gases emissions from lakes and wetlands, and having trouble interpreting the magnitude of measured values, until the presenter wisely showed a video of students breaking a hole in the ice on the surface of a frozen lake in northern Canada, and then lighting the escaping gas on fire. Fire shooting out of a frozen lake illustrates the issue far more elegantly and convincingly than a bunch of numbers. The numbers are absolutely important, and should be in a peer-reviewed publication, but the image of a flaming frozen lake is what the audience will remember, and will ensure that they actually remember the talk at all.

Keep it Simple

Avoid presenting too much novel information. Choose one or two salient points that you want your audience to remember (“take-home messages”). Place them into a context using general knowledge that is common to most people in your discipline (Biology, Chemistry, etc.). This could be “hot topics” that are being widely discussed in your discipline, such as climate change, speciation, global change, biodiversity, etc. Your audience is more likely to understand and remember new information when it follows from something they already know. The more specialized terms you have to explain, the bigger the risk that you will lose someone early on, and they won’t be paying attention to the important points later on. Nevertheless, you absolutely should define any technical terms or jargon you are using, but I would avoid it as much as possible. A general context also increases the relevance, thus addressing the most important question of any conference talk: “Why should I care?”

It’s ok to repeat yourself a bit. This holds true for concepts, terms, phrases, and especially visual themes. Consistent visual cues such as colours, shapes, icons, etc. will help to remind your audience of the important points you want to emphasize and help them to avoid getting lost or confused. Feel free to repeat your main findings / conclusions at least once throughout your talk. It may feel somewhat repetitive, but it will also increase the chance that your audience will actually remember it. You can mention your “take-home messages” more than once, in the context of different examples, different data or results.

As Brent Gurd once told me, while he was a PhD candidate at SFU, a talk should be structured as follows: Tell them what you’re going to tell them, Tell them, then Tell them what you told them.

I used to dislike “giving away the punchline” in the the intro or even the title of my talk, but I now realize that it isn’t necessarily a bad thing. Science writers often recommend having the main finding of your paper in your title. Rather than feeling like they don’t need to read your paper or listen to your talk, people will be interested to see what evidence you have to support your conclusions, or how you discovered your results, and you will have an audience.

Keep it Short

Nothing annoys me more than a talk that goes over time. Nobody likes it when a conference falls behind schedule, and it’s our own damn fault for letting it happen. My personal policy is that if I can’t impress you for 15 minutes straight, the least I can do is get out of your way quickly and give the next person enough time, and people in the audience to filter in & out between talks. If you’ve been to a few conferences, you will notice that people don’t tend to stay in one room for an entire session: they often move around between talks, and it is considerate to leave enough time at the end of your talk for this, as well as questions and discussion.

Speaking of questions, it can be strategic to leave some details out of your talk that are obvious to experts in the field, or which will invite obvious questions from them or others. This ensures that people will ask you questions and may help start a discussion, and lets you address those points during an informal period where other people are moving in & out of the room. It can take up to 30 seconds for someone to think of, or work up enough confidence to ask a question in a such a public setting. Having one or two obvious questions can give people a bit of time to think of more interesting ones while you engage with your audience about other things.

Be careful not to leave too much out, or people might get the mistaken impression that you have overlooked something important and they may not bother to ask if they question your competence. Feel free to ask your peers for help judging the difference.

For example, I work on “heterocystous filamentous nitrogen-fixing cyanobacteria”, which I identified using fluorescence microscopy with a special filter, and measured Nitrogen-fixation using the Acetylene Reduction Assay (ARA). The only thing I mentioned in my talk this year was “nitrogen-fixing cyanobacteria”, which was a big part of my main finding, but I didn’t mention any of the rest, or even which genera of cyanobacteria I found. Experts in the field will know what ARA is without having it explained, and non-experts are welcome to ask. I usually expect someone in the audience to ask how I measured Nitrogen-fixation, and I’m happy to explain the method. I did present the experimental design, which is important for interpreting the results. Nevertheless, details about ARA would be distracting and are not really important for the main point of my talk, which was about how rates of N-fixation by cyanobacteria respond to climate change and habitat fragmentation.

Timing my talk is still somewhat of a challenge for me. I find when I practice a talk, I generally take 1 or 2 minutes longer than when I present it in real life. In my case, I do things like repeat phrases I said wrong or forgot in a practice, whereas in the real talk, I just keep going because I’m so afraid of going over time. Other people have the opposite problem: they practice faster than they would when presenting. Having an audience can help keep you more honest about your time, but realistically, you will be practicing more on your own. Learn what your pattern tends to be, and when in doubt, make it shorter. Most conferences will flash you some warning when you have 5 or 2 minutes left. Decide beforehand where you need to be in your talk by that point, and what to skip if you realize you are behind. If you have a plan (and a backup plan), you won’t get as flustered when the warning comes up. Don’t be too disappointed about skipping things because of time. Remember, less is more, and it’s better to have a clear simple short talk, than a long rambling one.

The most important thing is to have a strong beginning and ending to make a good impression. I would recommend skipping a few things in the middle if you have to, in order to finish with a clear message at a relaxed pace.

The pace of introducing information is also important. Your audience will tune out or start checking their email if the pace is too slow, and you risk taking too long or not presenting enough information to keep people interested. If the pace is too fast, you may get flustered, or the audience will be so overwhelmed with information that they won’t be able to process it all. There is a rule of thumb that suggests “one slide per minute”, which I find is a useful guide, although I don’t follow it too strictly. I use it to judge the overall amount of material for a talk, although the ratio tends to fall as talks get longer (an hour lecture only needs about 45-50 slides in my experience). The definition of a “slide” might also vary, depending on how you do “animations” with your visual aids or presentation software. In general, I would define a new slide as anytime you replace everything on the screen with new information: moving or adding elements to the same background is the same “slide” for the most part. The one slide per minute guideline is still useful in this case, because it means not spending too much time with a static display, nor brushing past things too quickly. I also like to spend a little more time with graphs and results, to give people a chance to interpret it for themselves, and to ensure that I take enough time to explain things like axes and legends so that the audience can understand them and come to the same conclusions I did, or disagree and ask me about it at the end.

Practice, Practice, Practice and Rehearse

A talk is not simply a verbal presentation of a paper or idea. It is ultimately a performance, or maybe even a short one-person theatre. This doesn’t mean you need acrobatics and special effects to entertain your audience, but it doesn’t have to be boring, either. The best talks have personality, maybe a bit of humour, and something intellectually or emotionally compelling. If you express your feelings about your work, whether it is boredom, confusion, concern or excitement, your audience will likely feel the same way.

If you accept that you are putting on a bit of a show, then you realize that you must rehearse. I used to avoid practicing a presentation, because I didn’t want them to be too robotic, but I now realize that practicing a talk means more than just memorizing words. It can help to have a “script”: I don’t always write it down, but I meticulously plan the points I need to make, in which order, the appropriate visual aids, and in many cases the words I want to use. I don’t just memorize the words, however, I try to practice the delivery as well, including tone, pace, pitch, volume, etc. Rehearsing, even in my head, helps me to be more relaxed and enjoy the actual presentation, rather than allowing nerves to get the better of me. Yes, I still get nervous before a talk (I often carry a change of underwear in my bag .. just in case), and I have difficulty paying attention to the talks immediately before and after mine. Practice really does help, as long as you practice the important things.

Another aspect worth practicing and preparing for is the technical part: visual aids or presentation software. Make sure you know what platform and format will be used at your conference. Will you be allowed to use your own computer? Unless you are invited as part of a symposium, the answer is usually No. Typically, you will need to provide a PowerPoint or Adobe pdf file that will run on a Windows platform. Even if that is what you normally use, be careful if the conference computers have a different version of the software than what you used. Compatibility problems are always possible, so make sure you give yourself enough time check everything works as expected and to fix them if they arise, to avoid surprises during your talk. I use a MacIntosh computer most of the time, so I have gotten into the habit of using pdf as my preferred format. It means no smooth transitions, but also means fewer conversion or compatibility problems, and a certain degree of platform-independence. I learned last year, however that even this strategy is not problem-free. The “export to pdf” feature of Keynote sometimes creates files that will display incorrectly on a PC computer (apparently Apple has a different view of the pdf “standard” than Adobe). I was able to find a workaround, but it would have caused me a lot of stress if I hadn’t given myself enough time to check and address the issue the day before my talk was scheduled. I have used videos in talks before, which can be risky. If you do want to use a video, I suggest using a widely-supported format such as .avi, and make sure you have an alternative visual aid in case it doesn’t work.

Get Feedback

Get feedback before AND after your talk.

Part of your preparation should include giving a practice talk at a lab meeting, or for a few colleagues in your department before the conference (or at the conference if you’re last-minute like me). Our lab regularly spends an hour dissecting a 15-minute talk, and I find the feedback invaluable for judging which slides are working, and what parts make more sense than others.

If your talk is being judged for a student competition, chances are there are evaluation forms. Ask your conference organizers if you can get a copy of the judges forms for your talk, whether you win an award or not. This will also encourage judges to provide better feedback if this gets to be more common. Not all conferences will be willing to do this, and judges may not be comfortable having their comments read by the people they are evaluating, but it can't hurt to ask, and more requests might encourage conference organizers to make arrangements for speakers to get more feedback.

Other Notes

Bring some water with you in a spill-resistant container. It helps to have something to drink when your mouth & throat get dry, but you don’t want to spill it all over the computer, either. Feel free to take a few seconds between points, especially if there is a results graph up or something that the audience can look at. You may feel uncomfortably quiet, but your audience is not likely to even notice a pause of a second or two, especially if you’ve just given them something to think about.

Regarding acknowledgements, I often skip this part if I feel pressed for time. I still put up a slide with a list of names, but I don’t like to bore my audience by thanking people they’ve never met, and anyone in the audience will appreciate just seeing their names. I’ve actually gotten into the habit of putting important acknowledgements at the beginning, which makes for an easy introduction and helps warm up your audience with information they don’t need to worry about for most of the talk. This is a great place to acknowledge funding sources, important collaborators, big names, etc. On the other hand, having a few seconds at the end to spend with acknowledgements also gives people that time to come up with questions, or relax if their attention is starting to lapse. I’m not sure there are any hard “rules” about acknowledgements, and the choice is really up to you, so I would do whatever you feel most comfortable with, or whatever the people you are acknowledging actually prefer.

You may notice I didn’t discuss what to actually put on your slides. This really depends on your personal style and is less important to me than the other points I discussed. There is plenty of advice out there about PowerPoint-type slides and there are even formal principles to presenting visual information clearly, whether it be graphs, flowcharts, images, colour combinations, or text. Nevertheless, it is important to distinguish these from the most important aspect of a talk: the ideas themselves. Some people spend too much time worrying about their slides and not enough on what they are saying, the pace, and content from the audience’s perspective. If you are wondering how many bullet points to put on a slide, for example, I would say you are asking the wrong question and are probably better off with a different visual aid. I sometimes make a slide of bulleted text when I’m creating slides for a new talk, but they are almost always replaced or at least accompanied by a more visual illustration of the ideas I’m trying to convey.

Your visual aids should complement your presentation, not necessarily be the focus. Do not forget or underestimate the power of oratory. To see how relying on PowerPoint can ruin a good idea, look up “Gettysburg Address” and “PowerPoint” in your favourite internet search engine. It is truly horrifying.

That said, a compelling illustration can make a bigger impact that the most meticulous science. See my point above about showing fire shooting out of a burning lake to make a more memorable point than a bunch of big numbers.

Neil Dodgson has produced a video with some excellent advice for preparing a presentation. I won my first student presentation prize after watching his video, and it got me very excited about my talk again, after I started getting bored and anxious about it.

Into Eternity - Sunday 22nd May

On Sunday at 7:30pm, as part of Chapter Art Centre's Green Festival, Dr Chris Groves of Cesagen will be giving an introductory talk before a screening of Into Eternity.

Every day the world over, large amounts of high-level radioactive waste are generated by nuclear power plants. This must be placed in interim storage, vulnerable to disasters, wars and societal upheaval. No long term solution to this problem exists at present, yet in Finland, efforts are being made to develop one. This is Onkalo, intended to be the world’s first permanent repository for high level waste. Hewn out of solid rock, the depository consists of a huge system of underground tunnels that must protect the waste stored there safely for 100,000 years.

Into Eternity explores, through a series of interviews with those involved in its construction, the ethical and practical complexities which surround Onkalo. At its heart lies the intransigent problem of how to communicate warnings about lethal dangers that will still be understandable hundreds of centuries in the future.


Monday 16 May 2011

forward leaning


So much has happened since the last post here - too much, too quickly for a running critical round-up, or the stamina of a scurvy tune.

Of the bad news, from Fukushima to the ongoing dirty wars to xenophobic progroms (in Athens, right now, sickeningly), what more to say than has already been said here, repeatedly, about the splicing of terror and war machine? Disaster drones on and will do, the logic holding.

But these months have also seen a momentous reaching for liberation, a stirring emergence of self-empowered subjectivities rolling across North Africa and into the Middle East - a heartening, amazing and humbling movement from below, still unfolding, still gathering and spreading. How far, how deep? The subjects that have emerged, massively and historically, will decide that for themselves.

And they will have to, for the old enforcers will not easily get out of their way. Scrambling, dissembling, bombing here, turning the blind eye there, the old order will do all it can to contain, capture and exhaust these energies, and to restore privileged access to gas and oil and addicted markets for arms.


What amazing courage, what admirable restraint those struggling reachers have shown! Now, in the metropoles of Europe and North America, the antiwar movements could show their solidarity. Unhappily, the miseries of enforced austerity are blocking such horizons.

For now, anyway. But frustration and pressure are building globally, evidently. Either self-liberation or more fear and scapegoating, these are the choices in the North. The South, awakening, isn't waiting. To this, one can only say: yes!

Beyond that, word-poor, myself, these days. Scurvy tunes remains open, though, to the texts of friends. These forthcoming, beginning soon, check back from time to time...

GR


Wednesday 4 May 2011

Runt: taking part in the making of a short pilot By Katie Featherstone

The following is a special blog piece written by Katie Featherstone outlining her experience of being on set of a short pilot: Runt.

As I write, wailing and howling comes from deep in the woods, crashing through the peace of the countryside. We are in remote Camarthenshire and the 30 strong film crew swarm round a beaten up 4x4 carrying a camera and a generator. Drunkle (the main character) is driving the car down the narrow country lane. ‘Runt’ is a short pilot based on the Niall Griffiths novel examining the aftermath of the foot and mouth outbreak on rural communities in South Wales, funded by the Film Agency for Wales, The University of Glamorgan and the MEDIA Programme Of the European Union.

This is my first collaboration with Fizzy Oppe of Fragrant Films, a film producer and sciSCREEN regular – we (plus Jamie) are working on a Broadcast Development Award application for the Wellcome Trust (who are very encouraging) to co-produce a short film examining issues of mental health. To kick-start this project, I had planned to visit Fizzy on the set of her current project ‘Runt’. Fizzy has already managed to rope my partner (Nick) into the project - his facility and production company is supplying the RED camera and lighting – when she calls the day before the shoot asking if I would play one of the characters- the only requirement is that the actress must be a redhead. She is clearly desperate, so although a little taken aback, I say yes, happy to help, but….. I have a busy week…... Fizzy instantly replies ‘Katie darling, perfect, thank-you, this is the first scene, see you in the morning’ and puts the phone down.

When I turn up for the technical rehearsal the following morning, I am introduced to the crew as ‘Bethan’ the character. During the day the crew ask how long I have been an actress- erm, 5 minutes? I discuss my character with the director (Ieuan Morris), what do I need to do in my scene, and how ‘smiling, she gives an apologetic wave’ should look. Once I get home, I read the script again and notice it says ‘waving, she gives an apologetic smile’, this changes everything and I practice in the bathroom mirror.

We arrive on location: a small hamlet in the middle of nowhere, with the pub our location base. After lunch the first assistant director (Sarah, there are three AD’s on the shoot) calls ‘Bethan, time for make-up’ and the two make-up artists (Nell Bat and Catrin Williams) give me a wonderful florid pink bruise and a dressing, then hand me over to the costume designer (Alison Saunders) who shows me an array of dowdy costumes. We dissolve into giggles as we pick perhaps the most extreme costume, a pale blue cotton nightdress, a faded dressing gown and a pair of her mum’s very old and worn fluffy slippers. Everyone laughs when they see me, I embody dowdy and vulnerable. It is 1.30 and as I walk out of the pub into the daylight a group of locals drinking pints of larger outside all stop and stare and one stands up and looks very concerned asking ‘Are you ok?’ make-up and wardrobe have obviously excelled themselves. I head over to the crew and Nick looks shocked but also highly amused and proceeds to take pictures, emailing them to a number of our friends.

My status seemed to change once in full make-up and costume and classified as an ‘actor’; the care I received was fabulous- I had my own water bottle, endless offers of tea, not allowed to carry anything and a chair provided while we waited for the crew to get the scene ready. I have never had such attention. It was clear that the actors hang out together on set - so I spent the morning with Richard Harrington – by now transformed into Drunkle (a dark and brooding makeover), who was very kind and welcoming.

We go through three rehearsals of ‘Boy leaves the house and Bethan waves from the doorway giving an apologetic smile’. For the first take I come out onto the front step, wave and go back inside closing the door, for take two I come out to the step and stay there, for the third and final take I stand in the doorway and stay there to the end of the shot. The director is pleased with this and it felt right to me- I don’t think a battered and bruised woman would leave the threshold - one of my guilty pleasures is watching ‘The Actors Studio’. I spend the rest of the day watching the crew and the actors (Richard Harrington and Jams Powys) at work; they both give powerful performances to camera, take after take and I enjoy watching their characters unfold. Another key character is Arrn, an outstanding performance by Geoff the greyhound, who during one particularly emotional scene steals the show by putting a comforting paw on Boy’s leg while looking at him with his large sad eyes. As the director says ‘cut’, the entire crew spontaneously gave Geoff a round of applause.

At the end of the day the crew re-convene at the local pub, and as the locals order rounds of WKD and port (yes, really), I laugh with the Director of Photography (Timo Salminen) asking him for reassurance that my scene will look haunting and he teasingly apologises for not having time for my close-up, the Director thanks me for a wonderful performance and gives me a hug and Richard thanks me with a kiss goodbye. They are all extremely kind given my obvious lack of any talent….but watch this space, there is a long tradition of women who have played ‘dowdy’ going on to win Oscars- Nicole Kidman (The Hours), Charlize Theron (Monsters), Halle Berry (Monsters Ball), Sandra Bullock (The Blind Side) …

I hope we can premier Runt at sciSCREEN, this film touches on issues of grief, suicide, social deprivation and regeneration, emphasizing the importance for farming communities of maintaining a strong connection with the land and the devastating effects of the foot and mouth crisis in 2002. It would also be a chance for us all to meet and support local film-makers, the crew were mainly young filmmakers based in Cardiff, some had heard of sciSCREEN and were keen to hear more about what we do. This short film is also only the first step of a bigger project; the team is working towards obtaining funding for a feature length version and perhaps sciSCREEN can support them on that journey.

Black Swan: From the sublime to the... by Michelle Ryan

The following is a piece written by Michele Ryan and relates to our sciSCREENing of The Black Swan last Thursday.

This was a film I was hoping to enjoy – a female protagonist, ballet, wonderful music, madness and melodrama! Unfortunately, I was on the whole disappointed - it is far more conventional and (for want of a better word) ‘patriarchal’ than this. Within postmodern discourse there is much about the ‘return to the body’, subjectivity, intersubjectivity and agency as well as looking at ideas of abjection, subjection and monstrosity. And there are elements of all of these in this film as well as an impressive performance from Portman etc. but the film lacks narrative cohesion and is sloppy in its representation of madness and disintegration.

Some of these points can be highlighted by the comparison between Black Swan and Red Shoes: the British film made by Powell and Pressburger in 1948. In Red Shoes, Moira Shearer (a real dancer) chooses dancing over life and submits to Lehmentov’s ambitions for her and his power and control over her. She then falls in love with the composer and at the end, torn between the competing demands and control of the two men and her own desire to dance, flings herself off the balcony into the path of an oncoming train (shades of Anna Karenina). A melodramatic end to an insoluble crisis born out of a desire that cannot be realised both in society (in the post war period a woman had few rights in marriage, was rarely able to work and all important decisions and powers resided with the husband), and in the construction of film and the potential horror of a woman fully realising her desires. In order to attain her desire she must enter into the world of male power and control and she finds herself powerless to resist that dominance and control so her death is melodramatic because it is inevitable and symbolizes that world where men’s power is often represented on and over women’s bodies.

Black Swan could be viewed as a contemporary re-working of Red Shoes fitting into a ‘postmodern’ 21st century representation. Problematic as that term might be for people, there are many women/feminists writing about film and representation who are attempting to look at the woman/female body – what it embodies, what gets represented (through it, and on it) particularly in relation to ‘the other’, who and what ‘the other’ is and so here it is interesting that in Black Swan a significant ‘other’ is the mother. Some French feminist critics (Kristeva, Iragaray) have focused on the pre-oedipal phase and the relationship to the mother, particularly the rejection of the mother as a prerequisite for the child’s acquisition of language. They argue that this is the space where the female abject body comes into being because there is no way of remaining within that ‘maternal’, connected space without being subjected to hysteria (Freud indicated that the hysteric converts mind to body and translates her fears and repressions into a language of body images), self destruction and annihilation.

However, most of these feminists who are writing within film and cultural theory view this ‘abjection’ as a space for breaking free from the confines of patriarchy or male dominance, a space where liberation can happen, where obsessions, perversions, phobias and the grotesque threaten to destabilise the symbolic order. What’s interesting about Black Swan is that these ideas are present in the film and are referenced in terms of the horror but only shallowly and confusedly. I get the impression that at least one of the writers (all male) had encountered some of these feminist critiques around representation and embodiment possibly through their film theory courses and thrown them in without understanding or exploring them!

Aronofsky chooses to ‘subject’ Portman by only allowing her limited access to his ideas and intentions thereby making her produce a performance which appears to be about abjection and desire but which collapses into a confused set of ideas rarely followed through. This is a film made by a man whose basic resolution of the fear/threat/dilemma of this embodied, abject woman (who can be seen as the dangerous other) is to annihilate her instead of allowing the two (black and white) to merge into a truly powerful woman. As Simone de Beauvoir pointed out in Second Sex woman’s body is the repository both of men's fears and his desires, of his repulsions and his dreams. The psychological ambivalence de Beauvoir describes, informs the cultural identification of the female body with the beautiful and the grotesque, and as an obstacle to the sublime. And it is interesting as well in that what she destroys is her womb or at least the space near that. The female body can and in this film does carry these projections on to it and is both a site of fear, danger, eroticism and liberation depending on who is looking, who is controlling, who has power, who is subordinated and who is subordinating and this is where I think the film fails because it doesn’t realise the potential it has to create a more liberating rhetoric than the one provided trapped as it is by Aronofsky’s desire to subordinate and subdue as well.

As a film within the horror genre Aronofsky wants to ‘creep out’ his audience (his own words) but its representation of the fragmentation and breakdown of ‘self’ is clichéd (e.g. the split between black and white, passion and control, desire and repression), the over reliance on mirrors, the lack of a consistent representation of the internal experience of losing ones mind. Black Swan doesn’t go far enough in entering into the psyche of someone who genuinely feels they might be turning into something/someone else, losing a sense of body boundaries and their sense of self in relation to the other. Two films that do are Polanski’s Repulsion and Carine Adler’s Under the Skin. Black Swan, except in a couple of scenes fails to get inside anyone’s head (except perhaps Aronofsky’s) leaving us with vague ideas as to why this breakdown is happening - she’s a dancer, used to pushing her body to the limits so we have to infer she is pushed beyond her limits because a man has told her she is not able to be herself, reach the sublime until she lets her Black Swan in!

Finally as a number of people pointed out its representation of madness, self destructiveness and psychosis do very little to help us understand such states or attempt to represent them in a meaningful way.

This is a movie that touches on fears of penetration, of our body, fears of being supplanted in the affections of a powerful man, love of perfection, love of dance, and perhaps most importantly of all, passionate and overwhelming desire/hatred of the mother but ultimately this film was too scared to delve deeper into those dangerous waters.